tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3205240430255489119.post8008646429694953370..comments2023-08-16T08:44:39.804-04:00Comments on Slash & Burn: Good Boys Don't, But Mine Do…UsuallyAmanda Younghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17631269469790529611noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3205240430255489119.post-417275943819676322009-03-07T18:55:00.000-05:002009-03-07T18:55:00.000-05:00sex can be holy-crap-I-found-religion amazing snor...<I>sex can be holy-crap-I-found-religion amazing</I> snort. I am about now feeling very sorry for your boys. :)<BR/><BR/>I think tension is good, but I did like what you said about doing it and then finding a reason to do it again. Look forward to seeing what happens.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3205240430255489119.post-87520748943064511522009-03-05T12:34:00.000-05:002009-03-05T12:34:00.000-05:00Don't be a tease! Get those boys off. Although a l...Don't be a tease! Get those boys off. Although a little judicious dangling of the carrot (*coff, coff*) can really ramp things up when consummation finally occurs, I haven't noticed your characters lacking for spark. When Aaron and Joey hopped into the EMT van after knowing each other for a hot second, I was NOT thinking, "Gee, I wish she'd stretched this out longer." LOL<BR/><BR/>Looking forward to seeing how your version of UST turns out!Louisa Edwardshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00035634952904038638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3205240430255489119.post-16749666221314093062009-03-05T05:12:00.000-05:002009-03-05T05:12:00.000-05:00I love sexual tension. I love reading it, I love t...I love sexual tension. I love reading it, I love the heated build up that leads -eventually- to the big BOOM. Whenever I read a story that lacks this element, I find it a struggle to push on, especially if the storyline is limited to simply an erotic love tale without some other contributing plot. <BR/>I love the intensity that the build-up brings, the kind I'm not so sure is easy to come by in a few pages - no matter how graphic the sex scene.<BR/>Perhaps this is because of my gender and as your friend pointed out, "women need a reason". I really hope that's not why though, it makes me feel kind of limited and controlled...robotic. yuck.<BR/>With that said, your WIP does sound intriguing. <BR/>Hurrah for sexual frustration :)Byancahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07645133853521462243noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3205240430255489119.post-3913221376701032332009-03-04T22:46:00.000-05:002009-03-04T22:46:00.000-05:00tension ----- ahhhhh, until chapter 24, it's pitch...tension ----- ahhhhh, until chapter 24, it's pitch black and i sink into my pillow.....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com